company analysis paper revision using comment

Use below comment to revise the paper: (make the paper better )

1. Need to strengthen IT part. Only mentioned data center and security system. There are also TPS, CRM, etc. worth mentioning for Amazon.

2. Weak leadership part. Need to analyze the key leaders for Amazon and maybe their key ideas or initiatives and how those helped shape the Amazon into this big successful company. Not just list out who the leaders are.

3. Need to strengthen finance part. Could include the earning distribution from the major departments to analyze the business decomposition and how it evolves with time.

4. Weak trajectory as well.

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